Poetry Game 2

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    try to keep it ryming wit the last word of a sentence.
    (dont make it ryme wit the same word)

    when the love of my life left to day,
    he didnt even give me a chance to say,

  • Eibutsina
    19 years ago

    That hurting him was far from my intentions
    Im apologising sincerely for my heartless deceptions...

  • Ashleigh Skye
    19 years ago

    How could I have not seen,
    that to him I was a queen.

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    but he just wouldnt believe,
    instead he chose to leave,

  • Emily
    19 years ago

    Why he chose to die.
    I don't know why.

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    but when he died,
    i fell apart and cried,

  • Tiny Reader
    19 years ago

    my hearts now broken,
    feelings left unspoken,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    left on the shelf,
    by my little elf,

  • Elyssa
    19 years ago

    I keeping my feelings for him
    how could I have been so dim?

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    no one really knows,
    what he will soon show,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    he never did take,
    his slice of the cake,

  • *~*Soldier Lover*~*
    19 years ago

    everything I did was real,
    he's the only one that could make me feel,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    this very way,
    even to this day,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    i pray that he is alright,
    and not in another fight,

    and yea rohit it was appropiate

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    no matter what he will do,
    i know we will make it through,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    but if its too late,
    and we happen to miss out date,
    its ok well just take,
    our piece of cake.

  • CinnamonTwirl
    19 years ago

    But I will always keep hope
    And with this I'll try to cope

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    when i say to him that i love him,
    does he believe me or will he up and leave me?

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    he made me cry,
    now i want to die,

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    when i sigh i remember when you told me,
    that you never wanted me to cry.

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    I silently sat beside your peaceful corpse and kissed you softly on your forehead.

  • cac123
    19 years ago

    Smiling memories,
    of you and me,
    but now hes gone,
    maybe if i could have seen...

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    If i could have seen him one last time that way this poem would rhyme. Please dont blame my disgust, my emotions have turned to rust. And now Im living alone, drunk and disoriented while talking to the shadow of my own.

  • Christina Gomes
    19 years ago

    I cried for hours
    Alone with a broken heart
    You didn't care for my misery
    You didn't play your part

  • Natalie84
    19 years ago

    I'm so alone
    And don't know what to do
    How can I live
    When all I think about is you

  • xxangelchicxx2000
    19 years ago

    i am wide awake
    now feeling the pain
    there is nothing i can do
    except to remember you

  • Christina Gomes
    19 years ago

    i try to forget the hurt
    and the pain you caused me
    trying to convince myself it didn't happen
    because it just couldn't be

  • Seronum
    19 years ago

    Our love together was the best, and now youv left me with the rest. I should put you to the test and make you confess so our love will be success. Unless your a mess and youv caused me such stress with the lies of your best.

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    with all this togetherness,
    i think we can get out of this mess,

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    And happiness we can once again take
    Along with that lovely piece of cake

  • cac123
    19 years ago

    Loving him was a beatiful disaster,
    he was taken away, with tears falling after,

  • katie!
    19 years ago

    blood sliding down his face like tears
    Confirming all of your worst fears
    Hit by a car which took his life
    Should you go and take the knife

  • Broken Hearted Immortal
    19 years ago

    CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE CAKE i used the word cake oopsy noone cares.

    thanks for playing but obviously some people are obsesed wit other people saying the word cake!!!!!!!