Help PlZzZzZZzZZ =(

Could anyone help me plz. Can anyone plz vote/comment on my new poem titled "My Story" it really means a lot to me. I think this is my best poem so far and this is truly what happens. I only wanted to hear some of your opinions about it. Thank you so much and I promise I will return the favor just tel me what poem you wanted me to read and I'll honestly comment on it. Thanks again!!! Hope to hear fr. all of you soon!! =)

Thanks for everyone who give their opinion about it. I want some more so anyone plz I want your comments about my new poem titled My Story Thank you very much!!! God Bless!!! =)