help please...

heyy.. i feel my poems are not good anymore..can you please read my poems...and comment and vote..good or bad i need it right now. thank you.

Shes right right fr. ur heart and not w/ ur mined. Just be honest to ur self and be what you are. You could make some1 happy w/ it. Im gonna check it now. Plz comment on my new poem titled My Story thanks!!! =)