Our Last Goodbye (be as critical as you want)

- Name : Ben
- Status : Senior Member
- Joined : Jul 5, 2004
- Posts : 156
Ben
20 years ago

hey there, can someone please read and comment on my poem, Our Last goodbye. be as critical as you like, thanx a lot.
Ben

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- Name : Fireflower
- Status : Regular Member
- Joined : Apr 19, 2004
- Posts : 357
Fireflower
20 years ago

sure ben!

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