Homeless poems - improve

  • thishouse
    12 years ago

    I have site with poems and pictures:
    http://crazybillionaire.org/dreams/

    Maybe you could help me improve a little English in my poems?
    My English is not fluent and I know that I have a few grammatical errors.
    Please.

    Amendments easily applied in the version for Word (download):
    http://crazybillionaire.org/homeless_poems_pictures.doc

    Please.
    my email: londonerstoday@gmail.com