I need HeLp PlzZzZZzzZ!! =(

Can anyone plz check my new poem titled "My Story" It really means a lot to me and I want to have as many comments as anyone could give because this is my REAL story. Im feeling it right now and I dont know what to do. Thank you so much everyone!!! I promise to return the favor and do the same just tel me what you wanted me to read ok? I reall appreiate this thank you!!! =(

sure i will!!!!