comment and rate my poem and i'll comment and rate yours. deal??

I wrote a really long poem and no one has commented on it and I was really proud of it :(
Please will a few people tell me what you think of my poem. kiss from a healing Angel
I really wanna know what you all think of it
I will really appreciate it if you comment and vote on it and will be willing to return the favor

yeah i'll read some...ashley i'll also read some of yours...i know you've commented on mine and I appreciate it. I also think you are the one that gave me advice that really helped me. Thanks a ton.
Love Always,
Angel

cool something to read!