comment and rate my poem and i'll comment and rate yours. deal??

I wrote a really long poem and no one has commented on it and I was really proud of it :(
Please will a few people tell me what you think of my poem. kiss from a healing Angel
I really wanna know what you all think of it
I will really appreciate it if you comment and vote on it and will be willing to return the favor

hey, Ill read and comment it! if ya want can ya read a few of mine... thanx! :)