can someone help me with this..?

  • shannon
    20 years ago

    hey i wrote this new poem and i am not sure how it sounds.. can you read it please and give me your opinion..thanks!

    I am an Artist

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=276688

  • Kaitlin Kristina
    20 years ago

    Interesting twist on the whole *overplayed and over rated* cutting topic.

    I love this, very original.

    Great job.

  • Bret Higgins
    20 years ago

    I'd mix up the drawing... I don't like to see the same word repeated much, and definitely not in the same sentence.

    etch, design, paint, sculpt... to name but a few.