Could you be so kind as too help me please...

I'm trying my best to be the best writer that I can be... but I need some help. All I'm asking is the people vote/comment on my poems/quotes and I will do the same for them.

I just added a couple of new poems if anyone wants to read them... and I promise to comment on your poems if you do so for me!

please! I need some input!
...anyone?