Please read and rate my poems for me :)

I new here on this site and i write songs for my band, but i luv writing and i have turned them into poems, i want to have some ratings and comments because no one is reading them...Please read and rate them for me. THANKYOU! xXSlyangelredXx Also check out my website ! www.quizilla.com/users/slyangelred and rate my quizzes and stories if u want :)