All my poems. (please read before ignoring this topic)

  • Shelby G.
    20 years ago

    I'm getting little to no feedback on my poetry. i'm gonna put a list on here of ALL my poetry (just titles) and if you want to read one tell me which one it is. if its not on the site then i'll post it. i just really need some more feedback, more than just a "Wow great poem!" or "good work" i want some seriouse feedback

    LIST:(ones with *'s are my favs)

    A Childs Fears
    A Former Friendship
    American Youth
    And In The End
    Angel Of Steel
    As Long As I Heal*
    Behind A Bloodmoon
    Behind The Mask
    Bitter Hate
    Black And Blue
    Black Roses, Red Wine
    But My Body Stayed There
    Candlestick
    Carry On Our Youth
    Dark Day
    Darkness
    Depression
    Desert Of Sand*
    Doesn't Matter
    Don't Love
    Don't Say Those Words To Me
    Drowzy
    Empty Building
    Eyes Of A Child (also known as Dark Nursery PT. 1)
    Facing The Darkness
    Forget/Regret My Choking Sorrow*
    Go Away Darkness
    God's Hands
    Good To Evil
    Half Life
    I'll Be Fine Without You, I Promise
    I Relate*
    If The Sun Doesn't Rise
    I'm Nobody
    In The Darkness All Alone
    Invert It
    It's Raining Puppet-Tears
    It Was An Accident, Mommy*
    It Wasn't Half True
    Know*
    Later Than Sooner
    Let Us Live On
    Lost And Found
    Lost Little Girl*
    Love As Strong As Stone
    Mocking Bird*
    Morning Light
    Mortal Cost
    My Guardian Angel*
    Myself
    Nothing For Me
    Only Physical
    Ordinary, Extraordinary
    Primative*
    Purple Haze
    Rain, Grey, Blood*
    Raped Me Good
    Round And Round In The Spiral
    Scrambled Genetics
    Six Feet Under
    Spelling Out Terror
    Summer Day
    Tell Me
    Their All The Same
    The Clockwork City
    The Clockwork City PT.2
    The End
    The Man
    The Voice Within My Head
    Under Heaven's Skies
    Under Tears
    Until The Very End PT.1
    Until The Very End PT.2
    Until The Very End PT.3
    Until The Very End PT.4
    Valentines Day
    Walls Of Dieing Hope*
    Welcome To The World
    Weres My Mr. Right?
    Who I Wish I Was
    Why'd You Die?*

    This is basicly requesting one of my poems. go ahead and search them, if its not on the site then tell me and i'll post it up for you.

  • Robyn Park
    20 years ago

    Ok, you asked for it. I have nothing to do for the next couple of hours, so here goes! I'll read the titles that appear to me, and post honest comments on all the ones I read, good or bad. :o)

  • Shelby G.
    20 years ago

    thanks, all your comments were great. i appreciate them very much, in return i'll comment on a bunch of yours.