May
11 years ago
Snow, you create a country of ghosts. |
A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA
11 years ago
A great write. |
A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA
11 years ago
A great write. |
Suzanne
11 years ago
This is a very good poem. But I am going to show you how this could be even better if you cut out some of if (not too much) and added some spacing. See if you like it. Nothing right or wrong in poetry, just preferences. |