1st Poem for Spoken Word - 1 comment for 2!!!

Tomorrow is an Open Mic night and I will be performing my first poem, which was written to be more like Spoken Word. It is entitled "Fairy Tales Belong in Books"

If you leave a comment on that poem, I promise to rate/comment two of yours! Thank you so much, I really need honest feedback, so any and old types of comments/constructive criticism are appreciated!

P.S. Please keep in mind this poem is meant to be heard, not actually read, so if the rhythm sounds off, it may be due to that fact.

Thank you so much everyone!

Done with pleasure(:
You could do my latest... Thanks:)

Thank you Amreen! I really appreciate your feedback, I will leave you a couple comments by the end of the day!