Can I get some reviews for this poem, please?:)

Everyone says we have limitations

But nobody has a slideshow to Demonstrate this

So many doubts

And so much hatred

Everyones a Rebel

So alone I'll stand a Patriot

Red, White, And Blue

You simply can't debate it

Three colors of pride

The Glory bleeds never faded

People try to limit me and say

My dreams will only cave in

But my faith says

That only the bravest

Survive through the good, bad and ugly

And make it to bathe in the Greatness

To be with the Greatest

Most sacred, Loving people

Where non-existing lives the hatred

So fuel it up everyone

And buckle into your space ship

Airplanes won't turn into shooting stars

But if your double not your laces

I promise your dreams will come

And one person will fill in the spaces

Inbetween your fingers

And keep you striving for your Greatness

. . So spread your wings

And never stop flapping

Just follow your heart

And keep fuel in that and your space ship!

I think this is the best part of your poem:

"Fuel it up everyone

And buckle into your space ship

Airplanes won't turn into shooting stars

But if your double not your laces

I promise your dreams will come

And one person will fill in the spaces

In between your fingers"

If you could center all your thoughts around
the spaceship or flight idea that would make this even better.

Maybe you could add some other images that would stand in for some of the talking.

What's great is you are really expressing your emotions. See if you can find some image (a thing, a sound, etc) that could express it but not with words. Like just saying "the flag is waving" or "I wave the flag" expresses patriotism without having to say I am a patriot.

Good job!