Some one comment, ?

Hey, ive recently wrote a new poem called " oceans apart " and im Realy proud of it, but i havent realy got any comments on it, i would be Greatfull if you could tell me what you think.
I will comment on your poems.

X~*~X Tigger X~*~X

sure im gonna look at it now

sure ill look please look at mine if you get time

sure, will look at it right now, if u can can u check out sum of mine thanks xx