Need some feedback on poem...

An Unpleasent Life

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=284663

So could you tell me what you think? It would really help.. I need to improve it and I really need some help to do that. So please throw ideas, critic and anything else in your mind at me!

Thanks! ^_^

Its good but I personally would prefer it if it had a more regular rhythm also it doesn't always rhyme which isn't a big issue depending on how you want it to sound if I was writin it I would do this

I'm sick of living and unpleasant life
I don't want to be stuck with my/your wife
This life goes on without any care
I'm only ever shedding tears

However that is not great unless you want it to be that sort of poem......I dont think you should change it unless you want to, try and give it a more regular rhyme.

You dont have to take my advice as this is just my opinion,

Take care