1 for 2 a poem that means the world to me!

Hey guys I'm just here going through my old poems that i wrote when i was about 15 and i came across one that made me sad

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=934053

it has a few grammar errors I'll edit it soon but yeah comment and rate and i'll do the same for 2 of yours :)