Poem that needs feedback!!

  • Shelby G.
    20 years ago

    I'd REALLY like feedback on "Mr. Invincible" if you'd be so kind as to rate AND comment on it I'd appreciate it and return the favore. thanks

    -Church

  • Emma
    20 years ago

    I have done that for you and it is a good poem. If you could read my featured poems then that would be great. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Done...