Rate and comment on "A city in parts" please? (linked)

  • Jamparnell
    9 years ago

    Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1231523

    This is a poem I spent a lot of time on and I originally joined this website in part because I wanted mainly this and one more poem "I'm not crazy" to be read. So if you could maybe just read a little and if you like the style maybe a little more and tell me what you think.

    ps. its also a memory game to answer the question at the end. so after reading it all and without posting you want to post what you think may be the answer, that would be cool too.