Would love feedback :)

Hello :)

It's been awhile since I have written, but I am trying to get back into the swing of things. I'd appreciate any feedback on my latest work. I'm finding it very difficult and testing.. My old work was all quite sad. I'm having a hard time expressing happiness. LOL .. If you'd like the favor returned, just leave a reply here, and if there's a poem in particular, just let me know. :) Please also bare with me. I am a stay at home mum with three boys under the age of 3. I'm very busy!! But I'll do my best to keep up!!

Much love <3

I loved your two newest poems!!

Here is my latest poem called Cassie. Thank you if you comment.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1235728

Thank you! I returned the favour! Beautiful! x

I have read your latest few pieces. Will be commenting as i gain time on my hands

Hi everyone,

I just submitted an experiment poem I have been working on and I would really like to have some feedback.

It melds and mixes time, seasons and emotions, it uses some shape (concrete) poetry forms, similes and metaphors.

Title: New beginnings

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1236292