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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

Done.

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- Name : Beautiful Soul
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Beautiful Soul
8 years ago

September 7 (another dull day) please and thank you

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- Name : Sarah Day
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Sarah Day
8 years ago

Enduring Love

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- Name : Ben Pickard
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Ben Pickard
8 years ago

Shadows and sorcery

cheers!

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

DONE

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- Name : BeautifulSoul
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BeautifulSoul
8 years ago

Either of mone. Please and thank you

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

Um, I think you deleted your poems Beautiful Soul and therefore I couldn't comment on them.

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- Name : BeautifulSoul
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BeautifulSoul
8 years ago

My newest one. its a senryu :)

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

DONE

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- Name : Ben Pickard
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Ben Pickard
8 years ago

Cellardoor if that's ok

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- Name : John Doe
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John Doe
8 years ago

Http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1246195
The title is Mirror

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

Done

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
8 years ago

I'd love any comments on my most recent submission. It has been a few years since I've written anything meaningful.

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

Done.

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- Name : shawn
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shawn
8 years ago

I wrote a song today, it does fall into the explicate section. But any feedback would be greatly appreciated if you don't mind. :)

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- Name : -Choke-On-MY-Halo-
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-Choke-On-MY-Halo-
8 years ago

Explicit I can't read.

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- Name : Gasttlee
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Gasttlee
8 years ago

I'd love if you'd read and comment on my poem "My Love", please.

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