will someone comment on Breaking and hurting please

i just want ppl to comment on this poem of mine plz. Thanx

xxStaceyxx

Bet you had tears when writting this Stacey. Comes from the heart to tell someone how you really feel. Has the recipient ever read it and understood how you feel?
Loggyxx

if uve read some of my other poems,such as im inlove with my best friend or falling for my best friend you'll no that they are about somone called John. unfortunately i also wrote Breaking and Hurting about john too. he's never read them...ive thought out givin them to him but i dnt no how he'd react.

Wow that poem was really something it was definetly worth reading ...so anyone who has'nt readit yet you should go do it now............trust me its great.