NEED CRITIQUEING FOR MY POEMS PLZ

Hi I would really like it if some people would rate or even just comment on some of my poems especially:
The Love In Your Eyes and My Love
i'm also trying to rach a goal for either of those for either 50 comments or 50 votes so please help and tell me in here if you either commented or voted so i can return the favor.thanks a lot

hi chad.... of corse i'd love to read and comment on your poems.
luv always janice

hey there! sure, i'll check 'em out.
SatuzKa