I could use some feedback

If you have the time to read this poem and share your thoughts with me, please do so! It would be greatly appreciated...
thank you!

I hunted you
through fire and blood
that filled the fallen sky,
through growling sonnets
that belong to no one
but the faceless past...

I drunk the ashes of
nocturnal black holes,
to harvest the fleeting
rays of closing eyes
upon destiny's cascading path...

Thunders of clashing
Lightings were the lullabies
of wasted sunsets,
nestling in liquid caskets.
Oh, and I have tasted death...

But I have never forgotten you
for I have never met you.
Yet I held your arms
in the forgotten distance,
like twirling shadows
embrace the darkness

I hunted you
Through starving dreams
That burst into arrogant sunbeams,
through the implacable hands
of crystalized existence
That your laughter touched...

I hunted you
For I have never met you
but I always knew
you are somewhere,
everywhere in nowhere.
For I want you, I need you
to conquer my soul with your soul
Like the autumn frost
consumes the narcissus
for I want to reborn
in the cradle of your love
Oh, I have tasted life...

I have never dreamt of you
for I have never missed you
yet I always felt you,
Had the need to find you,
for my tears tasted your absent
the very first second I was born.
And since than I loved you
and love you, yearn for you,
like a blossomless rose garden
longs for fragrances of spring.

Sure, as a new member here I am open to suggestions.
Hopefully you'll reciprocate and provide me with some much needed feedback as well.

Koan, what a powerful dark piece this is. I loved it