Paths of life

Greetings.
This is my first poem that goes public, and to speak the truth I've only wrote a few until now, just for the girl I love. I don't intend to become a writer, but I'd sure like to see how you can rate & comment on my poem.
Here's the direct link:
>> http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=295638
Thanks.
Your sincerely,
Antonio Stefan.