Formed Poetry Challenge #3

I see Larry has a head start on the rest of you and has already posted one to his account so...time to catch up on him guys...

Tyburn...

http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/tyburn.html

borrowed from the vaults of my old stuff
will submit a new one soon;

Choosing to snooze

Choosing
losing
snoozing
musing
stop your path of choosing losing please,
wake your brain from snoozing, musing helps.

Hi All :) another little challenge I see :0
Okay..

"Battles within"

scrounging
hounding
pounding
fowling
Demons come in scrounging, hounding me
I will fight their pounding, fowling spree

This is great Michael but in the 5th and 6th lines, the two rhyming words from lines 1 to 4 should be placed at the 5th to 8th syllables ... I hope that makes sense? I'm having a go at this too :-) xx

Clever Miss Kitty ;)

Thank you, and yes I just read up again and you are right. Okay I will adjust it now. These damn challenges drive me ray, but I do love it haha!

M :)xx

I believe the last two lines should rhyme?

You are right Tony

now adjusted

Choosing to snooze

Choosing
losing
snoozing
musing
stop your path of choosing losing please,
wake your brain from snoozing, musing frees.

Late to the party, but here goes:

Bursting Bubbles

Blowing. . .
GROWING. . .
S.l.o.w.i..n..g
Going:
A big breath, then, blowing, growing, lots
of bubbles start, slowing, going 'POP!'

On the Make

Glancing
Chancing
Dancing
Trancing
You try your luck, chancing, trancing  me
I seek the door, glancing ... dancing free.

:p

^excellent, Kitty

whoops

whilst wandering the halls of PNQ

I 'bumped' into this thread

any suggestions for the next form?

I nominate Diamante

http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/diamante.html

obviously Hellon has the casting vote.

Shhh...
that's the sound of,
....tumbleweed, @ @ @ @ . @ blowing across cyberspace

Sorry guys...I'm in a remote part of WA right now with limited internet access so that's why I haven't been around. I think we should go with Darren's suggestion for a Diamante. I'll try to check in again soon.

Darren,
If you build it we will come