Something New

If anyone could read my latest poem Metaphorical Murder: The Victim I would really appreciate it. I tried something totally different from my usual style and would really enjoy honest opinions on it and any suggestions for improvement.

Of course I would check out one or two of your poems in return, just comment here letting me know if you want me to.

Very good poem. Voted & added my comment.
Congrats.
If you want, you can check my poem as well, and vote or post your comment.
Thanks,
Antonio S.

Thanks a lot! Already returned the favor.

OK I will look now x

Thanks. Returned the favor, good poems.