"Tears of an angel" - my 2nd poem *Antonio S.*

Greetings.
I had some free time today, and I decided to write another poem and post it here. It's called "Tears of an angel", and I'd sure want to find out your opinions about it. When I'll have time in the future, I'll write others as well. Until then, Farewell my friends :)
Your sincerely,
Antonio Stefan.

I will gladly take a look at it.

Thank you for the comments on the poem. Also, you're right about the ending part. I didn't loose my focus though, I just tried to finish it sooner. Sadly, I can't say I have too much free time to write a poem.
You can check the first one I've made public, that was made with a more "attention".
Anyway, again ... thank you!
- Antonio Stefan.

I think I will... just so you know, it wasn't me that brought the rating down to a 3.5..(which is obviously unjustified) and then again, ratings don't matter.

Don't worry, a number doesn't matter :)