Honest comments/critiques wanted....

I'd appreciate any comments you can spare on my poems, but two-worders of "great job. keep writing" mean nothing to me, and I want you to be completely honest and offer an explanation to any votes.

The favor will definately be returned if I see that you actually took the time to read, and didn't just type down words for the sake of me commenting on your poems... my comments are hardly sugar-coated flattery.

Thank you...