Constructive critisism

  • Bret Higgins
    20 years ago

    Hi all, if you want some constructive critisism read and comment on one or more of my poems and I'll take a look at your work.

    Cheers,

    Bert.

  • *Sherrie*
    20 years ago

    Could you please take a look at my poem little sister...Xox Sherrie...

  • Fireflower
    20 years ago

    u could look at ne of my poems thx!
    vedali

  • katie!
    20 years ago

    Ok sounds like a fair deal

  • Leah20
    20 years ago

    could you please read "The Meeting Place"? Thanks, I'll look at yours!

  • Tessa
    20 years ago

    I would much appreciate it it you would be able to read 'Inner Demons', and 'Kiss me Kill me'.

  • Misstress
    20 years ago

    Give mine a try.."enclose of you"

  • Emilia
    20 years ago

    Please take a look at my poems "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forver" And "The Final Cut For Marc" it would mean a lot... thanks