Do my poems suck

Haha. That's a really stupid question. You definitely have talent . I love your poems, especially the sad ones like, tears or rain and your too late. My personal favorites. Keep writing.

Don't take JPM's comment too roughly. You just need some work. First, your rhythm to say the least is horrible. You need to provide a flow so the reader will continue and not become bored after the first couple lines. Second, buy a thesaurus. (No it is not a dinosaur) A thesaurus is a book full of synonyms. Use this like the bible. Keep it with you everywhere. MEMORIZE! Gain a vocabulary. Do these things and you just might improve your talents drastically.

In the poem: "your too late" is should be "you're" too late. Make sure the titles are correcly spelt.

lol

lol poems don't suck..I do..lol jk poems are tight...

hey i think your poems are great! think of them as dimonds in the rough...they just need a tiny bit of polishing up! and dont take JPM's comment too seriusoly..his poems arent the best in the world either..neither are mine..or hardly anyone on this site could say that there poems are "the best". so keep it up! good job!

Krystin

They dont suck but everyone has room for improvement - if you want help just ask :o)