PLZ COMMENT ON MY 2 NEW POEMS

THEY ARE BOTH CALLED UNTITLED BECAUSE I CANT SEEM TO THINK UP ANY TITLES TO FIT THEM. IF YOU TAKE A LOOK AND COMMENT/VOTE ON MY POEMS THEN I WILL DO THE SAME TO YOU. BUT YOU HAVE TO COMMENT IN ORDER FOR ME TO SEE WHO IT IS. BUT PLZ IF U TAKE THE TIME OUT TO COMMENT THEN DONT FORGET TO VOTE.. THANX A BUNCH HAPPY WRITING PEOPLE.