i wanna read something original

I have a couple you can check out and tell me what you think...
DECISION
About a friend of mine who got married and her husband was killed when there house caught on fire, she killed herself afterwards.

MY ETERNAL HELL
I wrote this one about someone I knew in highschool, he got drunk and killed a man and baby when he lost control of his car.

MY SON
I don't think I have to explain this one, its about my little boy.

Check these out and be honest. I will do the same for you.

Thanks, I commented on a few of yours...I like your style - doesn't seem like you hold back and thats awesome.

I agree, making it longer would drag out the poem and there is no need in that, you made your point in those eight lines.

No ones opinion really matters but your own anyways.

I tried to comment on your Everybodys Fool but its not showing up on my computer, I tried twice. Could you look and see if its there and myabe my computer is just nuts?

you could check out my poem called 'where...?' its quite original and isnt sad or anything like that. its more of questioning yourself ...hope you enjoy it and read some of my other poems if you do. thanks xxxx

If you dont mind check out my poem called long lsot stories and the one called choice see what you think of them please and thank you

What about my poems....... we should count our blessings is one about war and how i feel it.
Thanks....over to your poems
Doreen.

Could you look at my poem called Little sister....
Xox Sherrie

Hey I know you've read some of my stuff and I've got some new stuff today if u want you can look at it please and thank you

my poems:
-cuento de hadas
a translation of a sort of love poem which i originally wrote in spanish and wasn't allowed to post

-tears of a fallen angel
a dark poem about a girl left alone

-emotionally confused
about someone that falls in love with someone she hates and can't understand what she's feeling

My new one, "mummification" I actually researched Egyptian mummification proceedures to write it.
Or there's my poem "Fog Over Muse" it's about being blind to the inspiration that is all around us.

A lot of my newer poems are original. The older ones aren't really that unique.