A poem I have written...

I can't submit this because it is in Spanish and 'may have inappropriate word' so i'll post it here!

Visit http://ets.freetranslation.com/ to read the poem in English- the English rhymes will become obvious and you will understand what it is all about! I will repost this in English but I think this version has more feeling…

Esto es un cuento del odio, el dolor y la pena. Un cuento de dos amantes despedazó por la sociedad y sus propios sueños

El cuento va como cualquier otro
Una vez sobre un tiempo en un lugar lejano
Dos criaturas de la belleza, bueno y malo
Pronto vendría la cara a encarar

Sus ojos encontraron y ella lloró para él
Para su sangre estaría en ella entrega
Ella había sido mandada a matarlo
¿Entendería jamás él?

Los temblores corrieron por su cuerpo
El hizo ni pregunta
El supo de sus lealtades rotas
El entendió su tarea

Pero aún a este día, los amantes
No diga de Su muerte
Ellos no dicen de los besos
Antes de su aliento final.

Ellos son ambos en cielo ahora.
Ellos huyeron este infierno vivo
¿Perdonarán ellos la sociedad?
Bien sólo tiempo dirá

In English

This is a story of hatred, pain and sorrow. A story of two lovers torn apart by society and their own dreams.

The story goes like any other
Once upon a time in a faraway place
Two creatures of beauty, good and bad
Would soon come face to face

Their eyes met and she wept for him
For his blood would be on her hands
She had been sent to kill him
Would he ever understand?

Shivers ran through her body.
He did not even ask.
He knew of her torn loyalties.
He understood her task.

But even to this day, the lovers.
Do not tell of His death.
They do not tell of the kisses.
before his final breath.

They are both in heaven now.
They ran from this living hell.
Will they forgive society?
Well only time will tell

Wow, that is really cool :D

I wish I could understand spanish its such a beautifully romantic language - this was beautiful I tried my best to sound out the words I must endeavour to learn a little more I think :o)
Thanks so much for sharing this too...
With the posting problem my advice is to post in slang catergory - then go back and edit the catergory of your poem to love - goodluck and keep up the great work!

Peter

Eso es muy amable de usted pero de yo no me siento que yo le podría hacer justicia. ¡Soy un principiante a aprender español y yo no son que bueno un poeta pero serían complacidos para escribir en su comunidad!

I hope that made sense!

hi eirisa
i did try to post it as slang but it said it was inappropriate language so i just posted it in english!
spanish is a beautiful language- i hope someday to be able to speak it fluently, since i need help with it now. my grandparents live over there, it is a beautiful place!