I'm GOLDEN; Time to help..

well how can i resist that offer? firstly congrats on getting gold!!!!!! wow!!! erm toughy my fav poems?
erm.... soar
where (because its a bit diff to my usual style)
and let go (cos it means a lot to me)
please read appreciate it loads and would luv to make it into ur favs!!!
all the best
xxxLoUxxx

Well I have 3 new ones My Blessing, Meaning , A True Friend. I have been taking ur advice and trying hard so go see if it's helped me at all lol! I think u have read all of my others so these 3 will be new to u!

"what I would do to be that one"

"The thought of your death, is more then I can take"
(attempted to fix would love your opinion and advice on how to further improve)

"A Dream"

Ok how about those 3.

my featured poems if you would please. I'm not looking ways to improve on them ...just a gerenal comment on it would be great.and a rate. thanks

thay are

1-Truly sorry
2-the one
3-Doors of my heart have opened wide ( i know this is a long one but on that i just kept typing lol my heart had a lot to say )

Killer ur killing me did my son write this well u did make me laugh! I write to write I guess I can't please everyone. I enjoy it and if I am not good I guess it doesn't matter I enjoy it and I write from my heart! I do try and to me thats all that matters.

I don't get offened I just don't see where depression is childish. Like I said it made me laugh but I had dealt with depression and anxiety for years. I wrote how it felt to me! No need to apologize I asked for it!

thank you very much!!!! I love you, I really appreciate it.

*Becoming a ghost
*Follow the river
*Unforgiven pleasure

Thanks!

*The Knife
*The Nothing
*Mummification.

They are all in dark catagory, not sure why my favourites are in dark, but if you wouldn't mind to comment then thanks! Be honest, though do realise, the poems won't change, I just want a little honesty for future poems I write.