About war and society, plz read it, it means more to me than i c

I wrote this to present to my english teacher, who believes that americas society today is fine, and the war is a positive thing. It would mean so so much to me if I could find out what others really think about what I've written...please, please get me some feedback...thank you

what do u want me to read and i will lol

much love
xX~Savannah~Xx

oh gosh sorry lol, its called I don't get it...thanks a bunch in advance lol, and if ya get bored, i hear the rest of mine are pretty good. thanks again