Please comment, I´ll do the same

Please comment on any of my poems, especially on "Death by Legs", my last paragraph is not that good, so any suggestions will be welcomed. And ofcourse I will return the favor, and read your poems and comment on many as I can.

Thank you!

Sure, I'll do it as soon as I get the time (in an hour or two i guess).

Just pick as many of mine as you care too, and I'll read a couple of yours and comment on them=)

Thank you=)