°°Rate/Comment On My Poems Please°°

Hello,
I Would Like For You To Rate And Comment On My Poems And I Will Try My Hardest To Rate And Comment On Yours.. If You Do Comment On Mine Tell Me My Weakness.. So I Can Learn From My Mistakes .. Thank You

Aaron Sinclair

Please read some of my poems and comment. I'm getting some good comments about my work and would like to know what some of the rest of you think. I'm kinda new on here

i read your poem, Cancer. please rate any of my featured poems, please. (Btw, that poem was soooo sad! i almost cried!)