I need help.....

  • AJ
    19 years ago

    Hey, I wrote this poem when I was angry, it's only half true, but I need to know what category and subcategory to put it under. Any sugestions would be greatfully accepted.

    The Gift

    Blurry eyes,
    Angry tears,
    I rush to my room,
    My future tomb.

    Uncontrolled rage,
    Anger controlls me,
    I need help,
    Where is everyone?

    I reach for the knife,
    It's under my pillow,
    But instead of cold steel,
    I touch soft fur.

    What's this,
    Wheres the knife,
    I pull it out,
    A blue lion.

    My gift from her,
    On valentines day,
    I know she's out there,
    And for her I stay.

    Thank you my love,
    For the gift,
    Your love saved me again,
    From myself.

    Where would I be,
    What would I do,
    If it wasn't for you,
    I'd probably be lost,
    Lost beyond hope.

    In my mind,
    Soft fur,
    Replaced cold steel.

    Thank you,
    For the gift.

  • AJ
    19 years ago

    If I don't see your answer (I'm at school), then just email me @ do_not_email_me07@yahoo.com.
    Thanks for any help given........

  • AJ
    19 years ago

    Actualy no, but I would like to know what most people think.....