Can I have opinions on my poems?

Here is one of my poems. It's not the best one i have though. I was wandering if you could maybe comment on here, or just lve me an e-mail *kate_9_schettler@hotmail.com*Thanx a ton! luv ya'll soo much. KaTe*RoSe (BrYaNsGuRl)

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=309966