Check Me Out:)

  • Daniel Fink
    20 years ago

    Hey people check out one of my many poems i think all of the writers on this site would like at least one of my poems well i leave you with the choice or if you want to so .
    L8ters

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    You're so random Matt :)

    -Laura.

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    Well maybe so, but just because it wasn't your slipper does not mean I wasn't able to put it into the Nun's soup.

    -Laura.

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    I am not. But wouldn't it be amusing if I was?

    And Teys, what on earth are you babbling about? :S

    -Laura.

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    And where does my name factor into your confusion?

    -Laura.

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    A pom? Care to enlighten me..

    -Laura.

  • EoB
    20 years ago

    I am sorry, Fink, but I have read two of your poems now, and I find them both terribly bad. The rhymes are almost exclusively forced and so is the rhythm. It seems like you write poetry in order to make rhymes, and that make them so bad. I will not read any more of you, unless you give me the title of a specific poem you are very satisfied with!

    Peace out, people

  • Ironic Allure
    20 years ago

    Well then, in retaliation > Teys, you are a boob :)

    -Laura.