will someone please read my poems?!

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    Hey, i've added some peoms that i liked from when i started writing, up until now. I would really like some people to look at them, rate them, and tell me what you think of them!! PLEASE RATE AND PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT!!!

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    please, i will return the favor!

  • Lil Luce
    20 years ago

    ive just looked at them...and commented!
    hope ur okay!
    xxx

  • *Guerita*
    20 years ago

    aight i will read some of your poems hope you return the favor
    -Lady jaz

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    I will read ur poems! Check out some of mine if u would! Thanx

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    I checked out some poems from all of you, check ur comments and such...be reminded, that i was truthful, and i told you what i REALLY thought of ur poem, i'm not going to sweet talk u....just want you to know what i REALLY think of it...i wont lie!

  • Brookeღ
    20 years ago

    Thanx ashley I like everyone to be honest that's the only thing that can help u to improve. Not everyone will always like the advice but that is what it is "advice"! I think u made a good point! Thanx for the honesty always appreciated!

  • Ashley Van Eperen
    20 years ago

    ^.^ any time!!! hope u enjoy ur day.....keep writing, and keep strong!