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i like the poem, it's short but it gets the message across, cutting is a sad thing and i don't think people should do it, but the fact is that people do it. i make poems about cutting, but i don't cut, i make them to maybe show why someone might do, to show how alone someone is. maybe i can help someone prevent it i don't know. but my opinion about the poem, is that it's really good and it gets the message across and it's done really short.

PLP ~lil slam~

yes i agree with the first person. its just promoting cutting which is a terrible thing indeed. yet a very well written poem i must admit.

Good poem, I have a short and cutting 2.

You call me names, I chose to bleed
I wear a long shirt so no one can see
3 scars that ly on my wrist
you told me to stop, but I can't quit

Yeah it's hurts, but I don't care
the words hurt more, the cuts I can bare
So when I walk in the halls
Call me names if you please
I'll just go home and began to bleed

mmmmm, we gotta be careful with poems like that one... remember sylvia plath!!!

ya we do have to be careful but the people writing them are just explaining something.. so basically when you come here and read them your listening

:~Jessica:~

i like that... its good writing but it could scare someone

Wow...I loved it. The words paint a masterpiece to the reader itself and the symbolic imagery is fantastic. Who wrote it?

the poem was good.....i think its really well written, and its amazing... sad.. but good