I wanna know what you think of this poem...Please...

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=318406

I wrote it this morning I just really want to know what poeple think of it...Thank You xXx

Ok I asked for constructive critisism not basically bitching about my poem. I take it you have something about self depression? No the rhyme is not forced and to me i put all emotion in it so...yea. im sorry you dont appreciate it.

Its a very good poem hun! Very powerful and has alot of meaning!
Take care....
Haily

ThankYou Haily :)
Love ~*~KiM~*~
xXx