how do u people like my poem to a special someone

I think its heartfelt and written with beautiful intent...(there is a proper forum for these requests to read and comment tho you should probably post this there)

Quite a few spelling and grammatical errors that can easily be edited - try typing your stuff in word first and having that spell checker edit your work - it does grammar too :o)

Coming to originality I think your poem lacks uniqueness - it sounds like every other love poem on here - but Im not trying to take away from the great and obviously honest write it is for you - I just hope you can work with my feedback....

=Eirisa=

Michael - don't be so harsh some people are new and don't know the rules and regulations...give him/her something to work with. Plus there are considerate ways of letting people know they have misplaced their posts :o)

Not bad, since most of the lines are from this poem: http://www.netpoets.com/poems/teenlove/0490001.htm

The fact remains that this is in the wrong forum (I will move it to request to read/comment poetry after I post this) and also you are not supposed to post poems in the forum. Whether they are your own or not.