Endless

i don't think this is good enough to be submitted..
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Endless

The beauty of the sunrise
bring tears to my eyes
another endless day without you
as endless as the skies

dreams of being with you
were never true
dreams of ultimate happiness
are empty hopes without you

all that I am
can and will be given to you
if only you could see me
I would lose this flu

my chances are scarce
love stands strong
the courage to face you
a battle fought long

all the grains of sand on a beach
cannot fill my heart
reserved for one person
only you may fill the part

first look at you
there is no need for a second
first stike of love
there is no need for a second

the day continues
it remains everlasting
believe my words
for they are everlasting

it never ends
the day without you
it never ends
until I am with you.
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