Would like some more feedback on my poems - will return the favo

Please could you comment on any of my poems. I would really appreciate it. I will return the favour just let me know which ones. Thanks :)

Please - Anybody.......... LOL! :) (soz gone a bit hyperactive cos i have got the feeling back in my mouth after a filling today.)

Sure. If you really want me to. j/k. I'll read yours gladly.

Thankyou!!!! Feel a little bit better now :)