Please feedback on my new poem sometimes

  • Amanda
    20 years ago

    Please feedback on this new poem of mine called sometimes. I will return the favour just leave it here which poem you want commenting on. Thanks :)

  • hussain
    20 years ago

    i've read and commented hope u can check my latest ones out too :) thanks

  • Timothy B
    20 years ago

    no editing needed girl. It's a fine pease of work. Ckeck out some of mine if you can.

  • Amanda
    20 years ago

    Thankyou all :)