Comments, comments, blbalba

Here's the deal.

I want honest, and constructive criticism on my poems. If you leave the title of a poem you want me to read IN the comment you give, I'll check it out and be honest.

please...I don't want those regular "Oh I love it. 5/5 from me.

read mine to? balblalbalbalbla.."

I'll read yours as soon as I can (my computer at home is not working=(

Thank you

Would u please check out my newest one "Walk on the beach" I would really appreciate it! I am still learning and I know ur work so I am in no postion to give u advice! U are a very talented poet! Thanx!